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All I can say is.......WOW!!!

You, sir, are a highly idiosyncratic young man.

I just hope You guys honestly like it... I just fixed few spelling errors I didn't notice beafore I post the story for the first time.

Quote from user: GeoXYou, sir, are a highly idiosyncratic young man.
I blame that man who enters my room and stares at me every time I'm home alone...

Quote from user: Robb_KNot only is Gyro WAY, WAY out of character being mean and evil, but, EVEN IF he WERE to have gone berserk, and turned evil, he'd use his knowledge of science to invent machines to do his dirty work, rather than just threatening people with being cut with an ordinary knife.
Well my interpretation of Gyro has a brand new twist to it... ;) Note he actually attacks people with his bare hands most of the time in my story.

It would be a lot more effective and interesting to learn why Gyro has such hatred for all those Ducks. We've got little emotion involved in this story other than fear. We should see Gyro foaming at the mouth (salivating) with hatred. I can guess why he hates Gladstone. But, I'd like to know why he hates Scrooge (one of his very best customers (perhaps for bargaining down the prices of Gyro's inventions?), and Donald and Huey, Dewey and Louie, and Daisy. He hates Donald's nephews for being so dedicated to science as Junior Woodchucks, that they make him (as the World's greatest inventor) look bad (?). Why would he hate April, May and June? A story needs such elements, otherwise it is difficult for a human to identify with the protagonists and understand the motivation of the villains (and truly despise or fear them). I suppose a villain can be more scary if it appears he, she or it has no motive (but that is, generally, a lot less interesting).

I wasn't fazed by the undergroundness of the story, which is just a dark interesting take on Gyro(, if somewhat illogical). What is just disturbing, though, is Chapter 6 Page 3. Gyro's lust is triggered by Dickie Duck, says Uncle Scrooge in a logical, deadpan manner. Complete with Gyro drooling. Eek.

I can't make out a single word.How all of you managed to see the letters is a mystery to me.

Quote from user: Robb_KIt would be a lot more effective and interesting to learn why Gyro has such hatred for all those Ducks. We've got little emotion involved in this story other than fear. We should see Gyro foaming at the mouth (salivating) with hatred. I can guess why he hates Gladstone. But, I'd like to know why he hates Scrooge (one of his very best customers (perhaps for bargaining down the prices of Gyro's inventions?), and Donald and Huey, Dewey and Louie, and Daisy. He hates Donald's nephews for being so dedicated to science as Junior Woodchucks, that they make him (as the World's greatest inventor) look bad (?). Why would he hate April, May and June? A story needs such elements, otherwise it is difficult for a human to identify with the protagonists and understand the motivation of the villains (and truly despise or fear them). I suppose a villain can be more scary if it appears he, she or it has no motive (but that is, generally, a lot less interesting).
Salivating?You're disgusting.
I can explain why Gyro hates them.
Hewe,Lewe,Dewe-Because of the prank.
Daisy-He was jealous of her winning the contest.
April,May,June-Revenge on Daisy by harming her loved ones.
Donald-Because he raised the kids in such a way,that they became pranksters.
Scrooge-All those years,Gyro was exploited by Scrooge,always doing things for him and being underpaid.
Dickie-Because she used her ''charm'' so that the others did favors to her.