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Topic: David Gerstein's errors in WDC&S 654

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Sim
In WDC&S 654, David Gerstein has made a pair of errors...
http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/3524/96496253.jpg
Looking at the above image, we can note that...:
1) He's forgotten some other Pete's names, as "Pete Bonfiglio", "Sylvester Macaroni", "Mr. Legg" (In Gottfredson!!!)...
2) He has not written "Romano Scarpa's charachters", but "Romano Scarp charachters"...
3) He has put a " after a comma, writing "moll,"...
I think he has not done other mistakes in it...
Simone
Ramapith
Hey Simone,

I said that "[Pete's] various aliases include..." and "just to name a few," clearly indicating that there were more aliases that I wasn't mentioning.

I remember "Mr. Legg" (AKA "Looey, the Leg"). I also remember "Big Duke," Pete's alias in this pretty bad 1950s story. It's just that I had to stay under a certain number of words when I wrote the WDC 654 article??so the page would still have enough room to list the contents of the issue! So I didn't have room to list all the Pete aliases I knew in English, let alone foreign names.
As it is, the last sentence of the article ("Note that we're...") isn't actually mine; I'd written a much longer version of the sentence, and Editor-In-Chief John Clark had to trim me down and rewrite it just so it would fit.

Quote:2) He has not written "Romano Scarpa's charachters", but "Romano Scarp charachters"...
The proper English is "Romano Scarpa characters." The missing A was a simple typo, but in English we don't use the possessive ("Scarpa's") in this kind of phrase.

Simone, should I mention that you made a typo too??putting a second H in "characters" (it shouldn't be "charachters")?

Quote:3) He has put a " after a comma, writing "moll,"...
The comma in this spot indicated a pause for emphasis. I'll contend that it's perfectly grammatical??in a sentence phrased this way.

Quote:I think he has not done other mistakes in it...
The proper English is "I think he has not made other mistakes in it." (-:

Er??Sim, we can go on correcting each other on minor things all day; but aren't these too minor to worry about? (In both my case and yours!)
Of course, I'm always glad if someone catches a serious mistake I've made (especially before a comic book goes to the printer's!).
Sim
Quote from user: ramapithHey Simone,

I said that "[Pete's] various aliases include..." and "just to name a few," clearly indicating that there were more aliases that I wasn't mentioning.

I remember "Mr. Legg" (AKA "Looey, the Leg"). I also remember "Big Duke," Pete's alias in this pretty bad 1950s story. It's just that I had to stay under a certain number of words when I wrote the WDC 654 article??so the page would still have enough room to list the contents of the issue! So I didn't have room to list all the Pete aliases I knew in English, let alone foreign names.
As it is, the last sentence of the article ("Note that we're...") isn't actually mine; I'd written a much longer version of the sentence, and Editor-In-Chief John Clark had to trim me down and rewrite it just so it would fit.

Quote:2) He has not written "Romano Scarpa's charachters", but "Romano Scarp charachters"...
The proper English is "Romano Scarpa characters." The missing A was a simple typo, but in English we don't use the possessive ("Scarpa's") in this kind of phrase.

Simone, should I mention that you made a typo too??putting a second H in "characters" (it shouldn't be "charachters")?

Quote:3) He has put a " after a comma, writing "moll,"...
The comma in this spot indicated a pause for emphasis. I'll contend that it's perfectly grammatical??in a sentence phrased this way.

Quote:I think he has not done other mistakes in it...
The proper English is "I think he has not made other mistakes in it." (-:

Er??Sim, we can go on correcting each other on minor things all day; but aren't these too minor to worry about? (In both my case and yours!)
Of course, I'm always glad if someone catches a serious mistake I've made (especially before a comic book goes to the printer's!).

Thank you, David for the clarification (?)...;)
Argonaut
This is without a doubt the strangest and most obscure comic-book nitpicking I have ever come across.
GeoX
Seconded.
Dutch Duckfan Down Under
Thirded. (I've always wanted to say that!)
Kneon
EDIT: I think I may have confused Sim with another user. If that's the case, my apologies.
Robb_K
"Attention seeking" is not unknown on forums (fora?) such as these. Usually there is a line between an "acceptable level" and trolling. Usually the offender is warned first, before being "punished" or banned. Often, the violator understands the rules clearly, and thereafter stays within the bounds of the administrations' rules.
Sim
I ask pardon...
I didn't want to offend no-one...
Pardon...
Cacou
Quote from user: SimI ask pardon...
I didn't want to offend no-one...
Pardon...

Don't ask pardon if there is no reason to! I misread your messages and will never block someone if there is no good reason for that, and without taking the advices of other users.
JessePost
Personally, I would never throw down with Dave on Peg Leg Pete history! Now that's a fight anyone is bound to lose! ;)
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