I've a story for you.
Donald Duck
Donald enter a contest to win a sojourn of 2 months in Orlando, Florida.
Donald loses, but wins the consolation prize of a sojourn in a city in Lombardy, Italy.
So Donald wins a sojourn of 25 days in "Hotel Tavolozzi", dedicated to Giuseppe Tavolozzi, founder of the city.
Donald left Daisy the nephews.
Arrived in Lombardy, Donald Meets Simone Tavolozzi, grandson of Giuseppe and Hotel Manager.
During his sojourn, Donald finds historical documents.
At the end of his sojourn, Donald is ready-relaxed.
Donald returns to Duckburg, where the nephews wait him because after not having found Daisy 25 days before, saved the mayor and received $ 1,000,000.
Finalino:
Donald relaxed and nephews enriched.
All lived happily ever after.
Signed: The author formerly (and now) known as Walt Zuti
I wish that someone tries to draw this story. should be about 22 pages
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Sim
A story for you
Message 1 -
2009-12-16 at 15:36:41
Robb_K
A story for you
Message 2 -
2009-12-16 at 16:47:42
There is a lot missing from your plot. Even the main story idea is not clearly understandable. Donald saved the Mayor? How? From what? Why are Daisy and The Nephews left behind? What do the historical documents have to do with The Mayor, and Donald saving him? You haven't even provided a clear story idea, let alone a plot (story line) that would lead you to estimate a page count.
Roger North
A story for you
Message 3 -
2009-12-17 at 12:37:28
I agree with Robb. There is a lot missing from your plot. Apparently you should come up with more parts of your story before you go through with writing it Sim.
Sim
A story for you
Message 4 -
2009-12-17 at 17:27:49
You're rigth!
I'm re-writing it.
I'm re-writing it.
Roger North
A story for you
Message 5 -
2009-12-18 at 13:17:32
That's a good idea Sim
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